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YYYYYYAAAAYYYYYYY BLOOOOOOOOOOOD

anyway this is PIES, page 1 of Between Love and Hate. Do you guys like the solid look? I might go back and shade it with gray / fix the last panel.

Please tell me what you think :3

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:iconspiritstrife:
the solid look gives it more of a gritty-blood-type feel to it. I think if you did gray shading it would look kinda 'fluffy' for the content provided. When will there be more pages up? I am interested to see more :D

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*~Nessa~*
:iconanoveltyspoon:
i'll have the second page up tomorrow ^__^~ thanks!

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~Kraftwerkers
:iconsterfry7:
I think that house in the first panel looks awesome, very film noir. Looks like a photo manip though, did you draw it?

If you did more hard shadows in all of it, matching the house in that style, it would look awesome. Good work so far though. Can't really tell what's going on in the story yet, but looks... depressing i guess, lol. :tmnt3:
:iconshadoling:
it has a very grainy, realistic sort of cartoony feel to it...like you're writing directly from your mind's eye. It's excellent, gory, and really, quite the art style you have going. You work with a lot of neat, well-trimmed and directed angles and I think you could really go somewhere with this.
More! :D

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"We are the future, Charles, not them. They no longer matter." -Eric Lensherr (X-1.)
"You think you know what you are, what's to come...You have barely begun." (Buffy vs. Dracula.)
:iconanoveltyspoon:
yeah, i was getting lazy so i just threw a photo of the house in there and upped the contrast XD

if you want to stick around and read more, the comic gets way less melodramatic, i PROMISE. ;3

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~Kraftwerkers
:iconanoveltyspoon:
wow thanks! you have no idea how much that means to me :heart: i hope you'll stick around to read some more ^^

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~Kraftwerkers
:iconsterfry7:
haha, okay. Will do then!
:icondarkerblack:
looks good so far! I was a little confuzed as to how to read it thgouh. Japanese style reading or American?

anyways.. I made a pretend movie poster names Pies before =D

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