the solid look gives it more of a gritty-blood-type feel to it. I think if you did gray shading it would look kinda 'fluffy' for the content provided. When will there be more pages up? I am interested to see more
I think that house in the first panel looks awesome, very film noir. Looks like a photo manip though, did you draw it?
If you did more hard shadows in all of it, matching the house in that style, it would look awesome. Good work so far though. Can't really tell what's going on in the story yet, but looks... depressing i guess, lol.
it has a very grainy, realistic sort of cartoony feel to it...like you're writing directly from your mind's eye. It's excellent, gory, and really, quite the art style you have going. You work with a lot of neat, well-trimmed and directed angles and I think you could really go somewhere with this.
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If you did more hard shadows in all of it, matching the house in that style, it would look awesome. Good work so far though. Can't really tell what's going on in the story yet, but looks... depressing i guess, lol.
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if you want to stick around and read more, the comic gets way less melodramatic, i PROMISE. ;3
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anyways.. I made a pretend movie poster names Pies before
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